Feedback Assignment 2

Really useful video chat with my tutor, lots of things to think about but also her comments and ideas make the project feel more manageable.

From my notes:

What is my message?

Connections? Linking life threads? Hidden interesting activities in an ordinary street?

Thread/fibre/yarn 

Running through the story. The Black Project uses linocut and embroidery in the illustration

Communication/exclusion

What does the house mean?

Order & safety?  Or a prison?

Does it transform? Night->day? Decay? 

Is the window a metaphor?

Is the story a metaphor for my journey? 

The hedge: 

Topiary?

Castellated?

A door or arch?  

The knitter:

Recluse/famous? Transforms

Presentation ideas:

Instagram + proposal/mock up for virtual exhibition

Audience engagement/contribution At what points? 

Issuu/Flipsnack

Single sided print A4 to make 8 page booklet.

Space for audience addition/self advertising on rear?

Task list:

Make a job list

Thumbnails

Colour swatches (- Symbolic associations?)

Anatomy of the story (Kurt Vonnegut

Look at assessment criteria and check alignment



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